Have
you read The Dead stars of Paz Marquez Benitez? It’s a great story isn’t it? It
is a Dilemma about choosing what we want and what we should, As you can notice
it has a ‘’HANGING ENDING’’ but I do like it just like what everybody says ‘’an unfinished story lets the reader’s imagination run wild’’...
that’s why I
make my own ending and here it is:
Before the night end and before I
say good bye, I hug her tight trying to feel if there is still a spark behind
but as I clasped her arms with my arms, as she leaned her head in my shoulder I
knew this will be the end. I can’t feel any spark from the star of my dream, the
light of the star has faded away...
It was. It was officially dead while hugging her, she spoke in a subtle voice and says ‘’I am not sure what to feel and what to say but It was never too late! Not for us but for the both of you and your wife. Love her like she’s the only girl in this world, you married her you have to fulfil your vows to her. As you go back to your place start a new life, start making a new star in the eyes of your wife.
It was. It was officially dead while hugging her, she spoke in a subtle voice and says ‘’I am not sure what to feel and what to say but It was never too late! Not for us but for the both of you and your wife. Love her like she’s the only girl in this world, you married her you have to fulfil your vows to her. As you go back to your place start a new life, start making a new star in the eyes of your wife.
As
she said those words I feel a relief, a relief that all I was waiting for
coming from the end of her lips and it was the closure, I believe.
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